There she was in her rocking chair, reading her daily dose of books
She heard a sound- one peculiar of sorts
“I’m hearing things” she said to herself
And continued to read
It was heard again
She got up to look, mostly out of curiosity
Was it the door creaking? The fan humming?
The trees swooshing or the dogs barking?
Oh, perhaps there was a ghost in the room!
The very thought made her skin crawl
“It couldn’t be”, she assured herself and continued to look
With a storm brewing outside, the windows bashed forcefully
She rushed to shut them
“Bash! Bash! Bash!”
She had to shut them quickly
With the next bash, she broke down in tears
Not because of the sounds
But because all along, she couldn’t accept that the sounds were of her storm within.
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This is beautiful, Shreya.
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Thank you so much.
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Intriguing, and beautifully written. Storms raging within the mind are very difficult to shut out…
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Thank you, Deb. Yes. And sometimes, we try to convince ourselves that we’re perfectly alright when we’re not.
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Woah. This is powerful.
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Glad you feel so.😄
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Very nice👍
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Thank you so much.
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Beautiful creative writing. Love the ending. Many times we think we are okay until we breakdown only to realise the struggle within.
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Thank you, Kinge. Glad you loved the ending.
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Welcome.
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Nice one!
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Thank you !
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Wow! Beautifully written Shreya.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Well framed!!🤩
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Thank you ! 🙂
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Shreya this is honestly so beautiful ohmygod. So precise and hardly exaggerated. So like a poem and yet doesnt sound so pompous. Love it love it love it XX
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OMGSJISHAISJ Ahhhh BriN I’m so happy to see you back in the blogosphere! Hoping to get back to read your posts like the good ol’ days 🙂
Thank you so much! Your comments always warm my heart :”)
Some people prefer the pompous poems to the simple ones. But I can’t even get myself to read the complicated poems, there’s no way I’m writing something like that 😂 Glad to know we like the same style of writing 🙂
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Ohmygosh I’m lovingg the phrase “good old days” *dances around*🤗😂🙌💓💓❤Thank youu shreya🖤❤
Yes absolutely 😂 I didn’t even wait to think that the extravagant ones were loved by some too.🙂😅 And yes, glad too! We would enjoy it better this way😁 X
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Beautiful and intense! 😇
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Thank you 😄
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Beautifully and precisely written😅😆
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Thank you.
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Oh Shreya, so well written, the ended was perfect.
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Thank you so much.
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